I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ella, wow you have done some amazing mahi this week! The Bider is so creative and absolutely beautiful. The way you merged a butterfly and spider together is clever and very well edited to make your picture look like it is real. I love how the butterfly gives the spider legs a kind of softness and the spider legs give the butterfly feeling of strength. So well done Ella. Very cool idea to take a photo our climbing tree! You researched it well and created a well set out fact sheet that clearly shows everything you have found out. Another very cool idea, that tree is a very special part of our school community and getting to know more about it is really nice. Thank you Ella!
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Kia ora Ella, wow you have done some amazing mahi this week! The Bider is so creative and absolutely beautiful. The way you merged a butterfly and spider together is clever and very well edited to make your picture look like it is real. I love how the butterfly gives the spider legs a kind of softness and the spider legs give the butterfly feeling of strength. So well done Ella. Very cool idea to take a photo our climbing tree! You researched it well and created a well set out fact sheet that clearly shows everything you have found out. Another very cool idea, that tree is a very special part of our school community and getting to know more about it is really nice. Thank you Ella!
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