Kia Ora
For this weeks work it was a lot about art. I really liked doing this weeks work and learning more things about art. My favourite thing I did was probably My create.
Question: If you could learn more about your favourite artist who would you pick?
Kia ora Ella! Another great week of mahi. Your creates look really striking and the Pahurehure one has a lot of well considered detail in it. The research on artist Dick Frizzel is well set out in a timeline, highlighting his achievements in order. Your writing is growing each week, you have used short and long sentences which makes your writing flow. Lots of describing to, you are adding more detail to explain the setting and characters. Well done. Next step for writing is to grow the ending, thinking about how the solution to the problem (finding the treasure) can be explained more. Maybe adding in a bit more drama! Excellent work Ella.
ReplyDeleteHi Ella! Wow i love how you have shown your representing of Papakura it looks legit. it is a very creative idea.Maybe next time you could take the photo a bit closer so then we can see it clearer?
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