I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
for this weeks topic we were thinking should we have the border open and if you didn't see that was the topic for my writing for this week. I hope you enjoy looking at my work.
Question: do you think we should open the border let me know?
Kia ora Ella, wow your cafe looks amazing! So well set out, as you always have a flair for graphic design. Interview was clear and I could tell you were well prepped and planned for recording time, this meant your video was clear and professional! What a great contrast for your Venn diagram, international students and students could definitely have a different point of view. Another fantastic week of sharing at Meets and being a positive learner at home, great work!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Ella, wow your cafe looks amazing! So well set out, as you always have a flair for graphic design. Interview was clear and I could tell you were well prepped and planned for recording time, this meant your video was clear and professional! What a great contrast for your Venn diagram, international students and students could definitely have a different point of view. Another fantastic week of sharing at Meets and being a positive learner at home, great work!
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