I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This is this weeks work I really enjoyed doing this. My favourite thing I did was probably making the ice blocks to me this weeks work was very fun and I really liked it would you do it?
Kia ora Ella i really like your finished product of you'er ice block and your writing was really interesting in fact it was eye catching keep up the good work
Ka pai Ella. Your writing was captivating as always. It was the highlight for me although your ice blocks look pretty damn good too. I enjoyed your writing cos it was funny as. I wouldn't imagine that Trump would have to eat too much veges to turn into an orange since it's his natural fake color. The only thing I thought your story was missing, and it's only minor, was a catchy title. Otherwise it was ka mau te wehi.
Kia ora Ella! Another great wiki! the ice block looks yum, what flavour was it? You have continued to practise maths, the lunch you chose and added up is well set out as is the kai slide where you needed to think in decimals. It is awesome to see your confidence grow each week. Your writing is set out clearly using paragraphing correctly. Lots of interesting describing which adds a lot of interest to the reader. So many great DLO creations, comparing kai and finding 3D shapes was interesting and informative. Tino pai!
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Kia ora Ella i really like your finished product of you'er ice block and your writing was really interesting in fact it was eye catching keep up the good work
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Ka pai Ella. Your writing was captivating as always. It was the highlight for me although your ice blocks look pretty damn good too. I enjoyed your writing cos it was funny as. I wouldn't imagine that Trump would have to eat too much veges to turn into an orange since it's his natural fake color. The only thing I thought your story was missing, and it's only minor, was a catchy title. Otherwise it was ka mau te wehi.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ella! Another great wiki! the ice block looks yum, what flavour was it? You have continued to practise maths, the lunch you chose and added up is well set out as is the kai slide where you needed to think in decimals. It is awesome to see your confidence grow each week. Your writing is set out clearly using paragraphing correctly. Lots of interesting describing which adds a lot of interest to the reader. So many great DLO creations, comparing kai and finding 3D shapes was interesting and informative. Tino pai!
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