I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ella, Wow this is such a neat skyscraper! You have been very creative in your design and I really like seeing the different materials that you have used. Have you seen other skyscrapers like this before? If your skyscraper was to be built what sort of business do you think would be in there or would it be like the Sky Tower in Auckland and tourists could visit it?
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Hi Ella,
ReplyDeleteWow this is such a neat skyscraper! You have been very creative in your design and I really like seeing the different materials that you have used.
Have you seen other skyscrapers like this before?
If your skyscraper was to be built what sort of business do you think would be in there or would it be like the Sky Tower in Auckland and tourists could visit it?
Hi I have seen some big building in Auckland City and on TV. If it was build it would would be the worlds biggest stadium.
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