I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow these look really yummy, I'm sure that you and your sisters enjoyed eating them! Did you share them with Mum and Dad too? When you have time can you go back into your Google Slides and add in step 2, it seems to be missing at the moment.
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Hi Ella,
ReplyDeleteWow these look really yummy, I'm sure that you and your sisters enjoyed eating them! Did you share them with Mum and Dad too?
When you have time can you go back into your Google Slides and add in step 2, it seems to be missing at the moment.