I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ella, I like how you have presented your box design in a bright and eye catching way! What are the pink domes? Are these the chocolates or something else?
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Hi Ella,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have presented your box design in a bright and eye catching way!
What are the pink domes? Are these the chocolates or something else?