I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow! What a great week of learning Ella. Your poem has lots of personification and it was nice to see you connect this to how you see your Dad, very awesome. Your rain gauge looks so interesting, next time remember to explain how you put it together and inform your audience about how it worked or didn't work when you used it. So interesting! Your maths is clearly set out and you have explained your ideas. Keep up the excellent effort!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Awesome work Ella.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a great week of learning Ella. Your poem has lots of personification and it was nice to see you connect this to how you see your Dad, very awesome. Your rain gauge looks so interesting, next time remember to explain how you put it together and inform your audience about how it worked or didn't work when you used it. So interesting! Your maths is clearly set out and you have explained your ideas. Keep up the excellent effort!
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