My Edit Writing

 if you open the book the monsters will come alive so i tolde her not to go nere the book shelf but she said way but i did not tall her. It became night time and we went to bed she sleeped on the couch and i sleep in my bed room. At night i chold here something but never thorut bad so i just went to sleep but i chold still her some thing so i went down sters and all of the 

If you open the book  monsters will come alive. So I tolde her not to go nere the book shelf. But she said why but I did not tall her. It became night and we went to bed she sleeped on the couch and i sleep in my bed room. At night I could here something but never thorut bad so i went back to sleep. But I could still her some thing so I went down sters and all of the books were open.

26.3.21 The highlighted words are what i edit

Today we have been learning about editing. We got told that we have to grab a chunk out of our journal writing and edit it. There are 2 copy's of this text. The text what is highlighted is the edited one. DO YOU LIKE EDITING???