To day we were writing about the school canopy and this is my writing and I hope you enjoy
The school canopy
At my school people have come in to build a canopy. When they cut the concrete it was so loud and noisy. But the coolest part was when they put up the polls. The polls were so big and tall. They are nearly finished doing the canopy and it already looks amazing.
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