I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Ella I'm Franki i loved your cyber smart t shirt. My favorite thing about the shirt is the Photo of Billie eilish poking out her tongue. Next time it would be even cooler if you wrote a paragraph about your t shirt. Bye
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Ella
ReplyDeleteI'm Franki i loved your cyber smart t shirt.
My favorite thing about the shirt is the Photo of Billie eilish poking out her tongue. Next time it would be even cooler if you wrote a paragraph about your t shirt. Bye
god job
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