I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room kahikatea and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin . This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, March 26, 2021
Change project
My Edit Writing
if you open the book the monsters will come alive so i tolde her not to go nere the book shelf but she said way but i did not tall her. It became night time and we went to bed she sleeped on the couch and i sleep in my bed room. At night i chold here something but never thorut bad so i just went to sleep but i chold still her some thing so i went down sters and all of the
If you open the book monsters will come alive. So I tolde her not to go nere the book shelf. But she said why but I did not tall her. It became night and we went to bed she sleeped on the couch and i sleep in my bed room. At night I could here something but never thorut bad so i went back to sleep. But I could still her some thing so I went down sters and all of the books were open.
26.3.21 The highlighted words are what i edit
Today we have been learning about editing. We got told that we have to grab a chunk out of our journal writing and edit it. There are 2 copy's of this text. The text what is highlighted is the edited one. DO YOU LIKE EDITING???
Thursday, March 25, 2021
If i was the president of class I would
If i was the president of class and If i could make a change. I would make an up steer's and the class would be the down steer's. In the up steer's there would be a kitchen. Why I would put a kitchen in the up steer's is because the khh hub love’s to cook kai and bake yum creative food. In the kitchen there would be all of the food you would need to make any food you can think of. In the kitchen there would be a sync,fridge,oven and a dining area. The dining area would have a table and cheers.
This week we are leaning about change. For this weeks writing there were options what you could choose. So i chose if i was the president of class i would. I hope you enjoy😁
Tuesday, March 23, 2021
Change
Friday, March 19, 2021
Space Reading
Thursday, March 11, 2021
My reading work for week 5
Tuesday, March 9, 2021
Friday, March 5, 2021
Ella Enviromental Changes LCS 2021
Tuesday, March 2, 2021
Garden Kai Writing